1.20.2014

The Unforgivable Love

(In the morning, in the train)

“Damn! This train bet to be kidding me! I’m in hurry, come on.” The train gives a lurch and starts off.

“Excuse me, excuse me, uh sorry, excuse me.” A man walks through crowd of people in the train, try to find comfort side to stand. “Here we go. Hup.” He puts his briefcase in the bag.

Allie still glances her watch over and over again, she couldn’t stop glance to the minutes that just wasted. Her cell phone rings all the time, someone over there keep asking the same questions “Where are you now?” and Allie keep answering the same questions “I still in the train, there’s something wrong with the train and I don’t know what it is!”  Allie keeps talking, suddenly the train hurtles and makes her lost her balance. She drops herself to the man next to her.

“Oh sorry, sorry sir, sorry.” Allie’s trying to stand steadly.

“it’s ok, it’s ok. Wait…… Alie?” the man’s trying to figure out Allie’s appearance.

Allie get confused, “Who the hell is this men?” she stares at his face deeply.

“Allie? Allie> it’s me. You recognize me, don’t you?” he flagged down his hand in front of Allie’s eyes.

“Alex! You’re Alex! Aren’t you?” Allie’s voice is rising and shocking.

“Got you! It’s pleased if you still remember me. Where do you want to go?”

“Pardon, remember you? I just can’t forget you after all those 2 years! Sorry, I gotta go.” Allie steps

The man bow his head and sees Allie’s back wrist is fading away.



(In the evening, in train station)

After finished work, Allie trudges to the train station. It’s really typical day and exhausting work since her phone was ringing this morning. She takes a seat while waiting the next train; she’s thinking what happened in this morning. She met Alex, who’s her ex, they used to be together. She keeps thinking what kind of miracle that came to her, which just brought her to the past and pushed her to feel its pain, even till now she can’t refuse it.

“How are you doing now?” Alex suddenly come to her and ask her.

“Fine.” She replied.

“Well, I don’t know why you keep ignoring me, we just met, but you still mad at me. I just want to be friend of you, not enemy.”

“Please just don’t bother me. I have my own life now. I don’t want to get hurt for more. I’d forgotten you, but now you just came to me and try to be friend of me? It’s not easy like that!”

“But why? If I have any mistake on you, please forgive me. I know that we’d ever experienced it but we used to love each other. How could you do this on me?”

“How could I? After you got affair with my best friend? Ask yourself, How could you! If you want me to forgive you, sorry, I can’t. bye” Allie just leave him.


“Allie! Allie!” he shouts to Allie, but Allie didn’t respect it for Allie still rages with him.

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